Down and my soul weary
Clouded with troubles and my heart weak
I never say never
Looking opaque
And my path murky
Struggling to survive
Hidden in shadows
I aspire
Trying to make myself known
Craving desperately for love
Put down by people with cruel intent
But I was so inspired
Depressed and thinking negatively
Voice soaked in emotions
And with gloomy face always
I remain firm and unwavering in my purpose
My wall brought down by severe people of nasty purpose
Held hostage by circumstances
Despair and in thought of suicide
But without fail…………
I rose, for I was persistent
I was the scorn of the community
And my life thwarted
But faith and hope kept me moving
And now I have crossed that ocean of problems
I ran fast past that hurricane of depression
Now I’m walking on water
Living that dream
My very own dream
Things we can achieve if we have faith….if we keep walking
Beautiful
YES! Thank you Soma. Appreciate!
Wonderful words 🙂
Thank you 🙂
Depression is a monster roaming and we need to run past it always, i always enjoy your writing…
Thank you. Appreciate! 🙂
lovely
Thank you 🙂
I love your lyrical rhyme rhythm. You have such a smooth flow that includes such powerful meaning. It’s refreshing and yet lingers in the mind. Great stuff!
I’m flattered :). Thank you!
Very nice. Blessings.
Thank you Emmal. Blessings 🙂
“I rose, for I was persistent
I was the scorn of the community
And my life thwarted
But faith and hope kept me moving”
You cant begin to imagine how much I can relate.
Good writing brother. God Bless.
Glad you could relate to it..Thank you. 🙂
Dear Numero Uno, In case I haven’t mentioned it, I want to thank you very much for liking my poem “I Colored A Dream Today.” I’m trying to get up to date with my very late thank you’s because you and other bloggers so thoughtfully responded to me. BTW Wow! Great soul poetry (the only kind that is REAL). Love the uplift/redemption at the end. I have a lot like that. I guess because I can relate too! I look forward to receiving more.
Of course :). Just keep doing what you do and you will have me on your list. Thank you!
Your words cone straight from the heart where true poets are born. Very insightful and epic in climax.