Enemies in disguise
Hard, cruel and violent
Wolves in sheep clothing
Heart full of hate
As their views are evil beyond repair
Acting like they care
But deep down evil prevail
Heart dark as night
Those beasts
They have treated me thus;
My pains, their happiness
My failure, their greatest achievement
Demons among humans
Treacherous vermins
With garrulous tongue
They act with no remorse
Wicked and with cruel intent
They have turned into walls impeding my path
Striving hard to tear me into pieces
And see me turn to dust
To immobilize and cut me from moving
Those beasts
Their lifelong plan is to see me lifeless
Treating me negatively
Treatment inhuman
Cruel words said to me every passing day
Praying and waiting to see me breathless
Along, my dreams
Those beasts
Sometimes I wonder
Who am I?
A small town boy
Trying to become a man
Why are these beasts treating me thus?
Am I destined for something great?
Does the future have something big in store for me?
That, I have no clue
Perhaps they do
Those beasts
d future is 4 those who’re prepared
True! and i am well prepared! Thank you ghaz :). Appreciate!
I don’t know if I like this poem because of the language you used or because I can relate to it very much.
Keep up the great work. I really like this poem. Believe me 😀
Well, I think we are all related to it in one way or the other, i believe to have people like that its just part of life. Thank you Erika. Appreciate! 🙂
This is ghud….
Thank You Ishah 🙂
I believe in one and another person life`s period this poem decribes struggle through reality. Very nice written!
Thank you Poojy. Appreciate! 🙂
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very nice poem NU!!
Keep the good work coming!
Greetings from Delhi!
Thank you Concerns :).
Greetings fron Nigeria too!
love this! really powerful piece!
Thank you Irene. Appreciate! 🙂
Yes, it is powerful, and painful. Nice strong writing.
Thank you sir. Really appreciate!
Very hard-hitting. Such behaviour among so-called friends arise from jealousy. Always remember if THEY are trying to pull you down…it means you are way above them. Excellent expression of hurt.
I’m so glad you understand the words Dr, that’s the world we are living in now, surrounded by fake friends, enemies in disguise, people with cruel intent and all that, but hey…… always be a step ahead of them and they will only see you soaring like the eagle. Thank you 🙂
Right you are….!!!
🙂 Thank you. I’m really glad to have found you
I love the “Wolves in sheep clothing” line.
Thank you DeFehr :). Appreciate you stopping by, please do visit more often 🙂
Seems friends have given you a fine experience which has made you to write an excellent piece of a poem. Actual life experiences teach us much and puts life in our writings.
Indeed they’ve given me a fine experience, and to not forget it, i decided to write in words, for written words are timeless. Thank you Khajuria. Appreciate! 🙂